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Here We Are Now

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Teen angst is inert;
burned out and faded away.
I thought it would hurt,
but it's caused me no pain.
You may come as you were,
but you won't sound the same.

With the lights on, it's less dangerous;
here we are now,
time has aged us.
We were stupid,
and contageous,
we are here now,
but time has changed us.

Pointless defiance is insignificant;
while dead rebels lead no cause.
Apathy precedes the discontent,
in which this era ends.
This we must accept,
no more time to pretend.

With the lights on, it's less dangerous;
here we are now,
time made us.
My first real piece of work in more than a year, almost two to be honest. There is something to be said about the first piece of writing after a long drought; but I wouldn't call it satisfaction, more or less it is relief that it eventually came.

This deals with some things I have been thinking about the past few months, likely iniated by my changed musical preference. The influence of the second stanza should be obvious to most people, as well as some references in the first. I don't know if this will make sense to many of you, but it does to me. I may have to do something to edit it, and I hope any problems are commented on, as I want to improve.

Humble Thanks,
-gh
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PercipientFish's avatar
THANK YOU! Good God I wan wondering when someone would give a good roundhouse slap to every stupid teenager out there. >< I'm a teenager too, but I know that being defiant against any adult, let alone your parents, for no good reason is just stupid. Very flowing, and the number of syllables in each line is just right.