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the Road in Retrospect

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Driving home, just after sunset;
my eyes on the road,
but my mind in retrospect.
Jim Croce is singing on the radio;
words I've heard a thousand times
but they don't feel timeworn in the least.
It takes me back, moves me to the right,
and I can hear him make the engine roar.

It wasn't much; just an old Jeep;
with four wheel drive
and vinyl bucket seats.
Jim Croce singing on the radio,
and I crooning words I didn't know
with childish confidence.
Grinning in old sunglasses
while Dad made the engine roar.

Driving away, just after sunset;
my eyes looking in the rear view mirror.
This is a piece which has special significance to me due to the subject matter it encompasses. The basic idea for this poem came to me a while ago when I was driving home from work a couple weeks ago. "Bad, Bad Leroy Brown" by Jim Croce came on my radio, and I couldn't help but think about all the times I had driven around with my father as a child listening to that same song. Those memories are very special to me, as even though I see/talk to my Dad every day, there is something about driving around in his old Jeep that I cannot define, and I luckily cannot forget.

The Preview picture is one that my father took in 1986 shortly after he purchased the Jeep. The picture quality isn't great, but that can be blamed on this picture hanging on the garage wall for a decade. :P

-gh
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